A moment in Time - Writing

I saw the Phoenix kicking the ball.

I smelt hot dogs and hamburgers – yum!

I heard people singing.

I tasted lollies in my mouth.

I wondered how good the Phoenix were at soccer?

By Gia

I saw the water park.

I heard the water splashing on the splash pad.

I felt the water splashing on me.

I wondered how it stops?

By Hana

I saw water splashing

I smelt food on the big slide

I heard water rushing

I tasted water in my mouth

I felt scared and wet.

I wondered if I could really do this?

By Ashton

I saw my friends.

I heard some boys jumping.

I tasted some yummy food.

I felt excited throwing water balloons at Mika’s dad.

I wondered if he minded that he got wet?

By Murray